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Eyes the color of the eldest of trees,
Hair straight with a light wave of wind,
And skin the color of the sun’s sandy beach,
But she is one made as oil with water
With no mix, just parts in the same glass.

So what then is she; this single person?
Both ingredients call to her rich heart,
Though one more abundant than the other
They speak to her in a tug-o-war.

Pick me they cry in whispers of pride,
Trying to pull her from sturdy ground.
Pick me! See how you are like me
And they point to those features;
Those eyes, that hair, that skin.

Like spilled coffee on white lace
It floods through her to clutch one
How much do I need for it to be me?
Skin not dark enough, life not white enough.

Pick me let out in a fleeing breath,
And the contents stiffen in suspense,
Awaiting a shower of their success,
But the silence grows and it deafens.

These eyes, this hair, this skin
Are a part of one being, therefore,
Two must mix as one in this glass.
No she demands, she is both.
©2008-2009 ~Kylamay
:iconkylamay:

Author's Comments

I know barely anyone reads poetry on here but this was work of mine that was published in a local book. Friends of mine really liked it. I finally got the courage to post it here. Nothing like I've posted.

Since this is my first time posting text in this new uploading system, forgive any mistakes I may have made.

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:iconphotogenic-smile:
Very nice.

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"The id will not stand for a delay in gratification. It always feels the tension of the unfulfilled urge." -Sigmund Freud
:iconkylamay:
Thank you very much.

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Anything can be found beautiful by someone.
:iconangelwalker:
I always liked this one.

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Most women look for a knight in shining armor, I'm looking for a werewolf.

The last flicker of daylight calls to me, but yet into the darkness I walk.

.K.
:iconkylamay:
Thank you, dear. And thanks for adding it. <3

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Anything can be found beautiful by someone.
:iconangelwalker:
No problem. ^_^

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Most women look for a knight in shining armor, I'm looking for a werewolf.

The last flicker of daylight calls to me, but yet into the darkness I walk.

.K.
:iconsimplydelightfulx:
Wow congrats on getting published! This is a really powerful poem. Very well-written.

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“The clouds I can handle. But I can’t fight with an eclipse.”
:iconkylamay:
Did you guys never get the book I sent with this poem in it? I sent it ages ago and forgot to ask.

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Anything can be found beautiful by someone.
:iconsimplydelightfulx:
I don't know.. if we did, no one told me about it. D:

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“The clouds I can handle. But I can’t fight with an eclipse.”
:iconkylamay:
No one ever mentioned it so maybe I should call and find out. D: I sent it to you guys. Thought you guys would like a copy.

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Anything can be found beautiful by someone.

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